homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Please cheering our team for winning.
We need your cheering to keep our chin up.
When I was younger, I almost drown my tub.
My younger sister got lost.
I lost my passport.
When I went to Australia for language study abroad, I have diverse experience.
This movie is attracted a diverse audience.
Her store sells various costumes.
Many couples are broken up for their various character.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected homework, Kahlen!
I appreciate your sending it.
Cheers,
Jean~~
1. Please cheering our team for winning.
>> Please cheer for our team for winning.
>> OR: Cheering for our team will help us win.
2. We need your cheering to keep our chin up.
>> OR: We need your cheering to keep us motivated.
3. When I was younger, I almost drown my tub.
>> When I was younger, I almost drowned in a bathtub.
4. My younger sister got lost.
>> CORRECT~~
5. I lost my passport.
>> CORRECT~~
6. When I went to Australia for language study abroad, I have diverse experience.
>> When I went to Australia for language study abroad, I had diverse experiences.
7. This movie is attracted a diverse audience.
>> This movie attracted a diverse audience.
8. Her store sells various costumes.
>> CORRECT~~
9. Many couples are broken up for their various character.
>> Many couples broke up because they have different characters.
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