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Hi, there.
It\'s already evening.
Time flies, expecially on my day-off.
I took my daughters to the school and went to a bank to pay the tax for my house this morning.
On my way home, I bought two cups of coffees for wife and me; we really like to drink coffees.
Before the lunch time, I set the fish tank with the soil and the seeds of the water plant.
And then, after a long time, I used my massage chair and took a nap this afternoon.
Before the supper time, I visited the dental clinic with my family because of my first daughter\'s treatment.
My first daughter, Irene, has a problem in her jaw and teeth, so she needs an orthodontic device.
It was my first time to visit the clinic.
I saw a dentist, who seemed to be quite kind and reliable.
After the supper time, we enjoyed playing Nintendo game together.
If I have a stomachache, I would try to find out the diagnose first.
And then, I can decide to what to do; there are many options for me.
See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
I agree that time flies in the wink of an eye when we enjoy it, Dr. [이름]! Thank you for the comprehensible output you have. See you!-Faith-
Hi, there.>> CORRECT
It\'s already evening.
It\'s already evening.
>> CORRECT
Time flies, expecially on my day-off.
Time flies, expecially on my day-off.
>> Time flies, especially on my day off.
I took my daughters to the school and went to a bank to pay the tax for my house this morning.
I took my daughters to the school and went to a bank to pay the tax for my house this morning.
>> I took my daughters to school and went to a bank to pay the tax for my house this morning.
On my way home, I bought two cups of coffees for wife and me; we really like to drink coffees.
On my way home, I bought two cups of coffees for wife and me; we really like to drink coffees.
>> On my way home, I bought two cups of coffee for my wife and me; we really like to drink it.
Before the lunch time, I set the fish tank with the soil and the seeds of the water plant.
Before the lunch time, I set the fish tank with the soil and the seeds of the water plant.
>> Before lunchtime, I set up the fish tank with the soil and the seeds of the water plant.
And then, after a long time, I used my massage chair and took a nap this afternoon.
And then, after a long time, I used my massage chair and took a nap this afternoon.
>> Then, after a long time, I used my massage chair and took a nap this afternoon.
Before the supper time, I visited the dental clinic with my family because of my first daughter\'s treatment.
Before the supper time, I visited the dental clinic with my family because of my first daughter\'s treatment.
>> Before supper time, I visited a dental clinic with my family because of my first daughter\'s treatment.
My first daughter, Irene, has a problem in her jaw and teeth, so she needs an orthodontic device.
My first daughter, Irene, has a problem in her jaw and teeth, so she needs an orthodontic device.
>> My first daughter, Irene, has a problem with her jaw and teeth, so she needs an orthodontic device.
It was my first time to visit the clinic.
It was my first time to visit the clinic.
>> CORRECT
I saw a dentist, who seemed to be quite kind and reliable.
I saw a dentist, who seemed to be quite kind and reliable.
>> I saw a dentist who seemed to be quite kind and reliable.
After the supper time, we enjoyed playing Nintendo game together.
After the supper time, we enjoyed playing Nintendo game together.
>> After supper time, we enjoyed playing Nintendo games together.
If I have a stomachache, I would try to find out the diagnose first.
If I have a stomachache, I would try to find out the diagnose first.
>> If I had a stomachache, I would try to find out the diagnosis first.
And then, I can decide to what to do; there are many options for me.
And then, I can decide to what to do; there are many options for me.
>> After that, I can decide what to do; there are many options for me.
See you tomorrow.
See you tomorrow.
>> CORRECT
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