homework
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HOMEWORK for 07/26
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What do you think is the biggest change with families in your country compared in the past?
I think changed a lot of things
There were usually big familiy in the past but not now and the old people in family have freedom [이름]d than the past
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I think changed a lot of things>> I think a lot of things has changed.
There were usually big familiy in the past but not now and the old people in family have freedom [이름]d than the past
There were usually big familiy in the past but not now and the old people in family have freedom [이름]d than the past
>> There were usually big families in the past, but not now.
>> Older people in the family used to think more freely now, than in the past.
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