Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework! This kind of activity helps you to stay on track. Make English speaking and/or writing a daily habit of yours. It only seems impossible until it’s
done! So have faith you’ll be better. Keep up the good work! I believe in you. See you in class!
Regards,
Teacher Lexie
Q. What are some of the benefits of traveling?
A. The best benefit of traveling is gaining courage.
>> GOOD.
In fact, while childhood to adolescene, I was a introvert and passive person.
>> In fact, during my childhood to adolescence, I was an introvert and a passive person.
It was difficult for me to decide or request something, refuse someone\'s ask and say even what I want to do.
>> It was difficult for me to decide or request something, refuse someone\'s favor, and say things that I wanted to do.
Especially, I got scared whenever new semester got started in my school.
>> I especially got scared whenever a new semester started in my school.
So, When I got my new job, It was extremly stressful.
>>So it was extremely stressful when I got my new job.
I was conscious of other people\'s gaze and gradually lost my self-confidence.
>> GOOD.
Eventually, I blamed myself frequently.
>> GOOD!
But strangely when I went travel abroad, I felt being free.
>> But strangely when I went traveled abroad, I felt free.
I enjoyed all of new things.
>> I enjoyed all of the new things.
I realized that I\'m good at talking to strangers and I can not be scared even though I face some terrible event.
>> I realized that I\'m good at talking to strangers and I don’t get scared even though I face some terrible events.
I even enjoyed my mistakes as well.
>> GOOD.
Thanks for a variety of experiences, I believe I have become a courageous person.
>> Thanks to a variety of experiences, I believe I have become a courageous person.
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