homework
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HOMEWORK for 07/28
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: Where do you think is the best place to raise a family, in a city, or in the countryside? Why do you think so?
many people have different think that problem
I want live in city with my family because city has many convenient system what I use it so when I need something I can use it easily. but the countryside has less than the city. city has also problem like poison in air and strange guys but convenient is imporant for me
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many people have different think that problem
many people have different think that problem
>> Many people have different thinking.
I want live in city with my family because city has many convenient system what I use it so when I need something I can use it easily.
I want live in city with my family because city has many convenient system what I use it so when I need something I can use it easily.
>> I want to live in the city with my family because there are many convenient system.
>> I can use it easily when I need it.
but the countryside has less than the city.
>> But the countryside has less things compared to the city.
city has also problem like poison in air and strange guys but convenient is imporant for me
>> The city also has problems like air pollution, and strange people.
>> But convenience is more important for me.
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