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학생이 쓴 원문
I am a busy person.
Because the daily routine is structured.
I wake up at 6 to prepare for Power English class. After English class at 6:30 with Instructor Aki, I briefly write down what I learned that day.
After wa[이름]g and getting ready for exercise, I enjoy my free time until 8:30.
I go to the gym by 9 and work out until 11. Go back to Zumba Center. Take a light snack for about 30 minutes and take a break. After that, I practice Zumba for 1 hour to 1 hour 30 minutes and go home. After taking a shower, I eat lunch and do overdue housework. In my spare time, from 30 minutes to an hour, I practice on computer tests if I am not tired, and take a break if I am tired. After that, I prepare dinner and clean up after dinner. I learn hip-hop at a hip-hop dance academy downtown every Tuesday and Thursday from 8 to 9 pm. On the other days of the week, I study for a computer test, do simple stretching yoga, pack my husband\'s lunch, finish housework, and go to bed after resting.
강사 첨삭
Whoah, Eliana!
You are such a busy person and I can\'t even compare myself to you, Hahaha!
I don\'t know where you get your energy with all those workouts and activities you do. Salute!
Aki~
I am a busy person. Because the daily routine is structured.
>>> CORRECT!
I wake up at 6 to prepare for Power English class. After English class at 6:30 with Instructor Aki, I briefly write down what I learned that day.
>>> CORRECT!
After wa[이름]g and getting ready for exercise, I enjoy my free time until 8:30.
>>> CORRECT!
I go to the gym by 9 and work out until 11. Go back to Zumba Center. Take a light snack for about 30 minutes and take a break.
>>> CORRECT!
After that, I practice Zumba for 1 hour to 1 hour 30 minutes and go home. After taking a shower, I eat lunch and do overdue housework.
>>> CORRECT!
In my spare time, from 30 minutes to an hour, I practice on computer tests if I am not tired, and take a break if I am tired.
>>> In my spare time, from 30 minutes to an hour, I practice computer tests if I am not tired, and take a break if I am tired.
After that, I prepare dinner and clean up after dinner. I learn hip-hop at a hip-hop dance academy downtown every Tuesday and Thursday from 8 to 9 pm.
>>> CORRECT!
On the other days of the week, I study for a computer test, do simple stretching yoga, pack my husband\'s lunch, finish housework, and go to bed after resting.
>>> CORRECT!
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