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I saw foreigners didn’t greet to people with bow.
But they greeted to me talking brightly and smiling.
They common using excuse me
When they passed by me although not bumping and touching.
I think
They expressed thier feelings well.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]ny!
We all have our ways of greeting other people. Some greetings were influenced by other countries. For example, A foreigner who has been living in Korea for a long time may adopt a \"bow\" when he greets someone, and a Korean may adopt a European greeting. Don\'t be surprised if you encounter this. ^^
Aki~
I saw foreigners didn’t greet to people with bow.
>>> I saw foreigners don\'t greet people with a bow.
But they greeted to me talking brightly and smiling.
>>> But they greeted me by talking brightly and smiling.
They common using excuse me
>>> They commonly say \"excuse me\"
When they passed by me although not bumping and touching.
>>> CORRECT!
I think They expressed their feelings well
>>> CORRECT!
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