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I think the universe was created by a kind of huge explosion. And I\'ve heard of the Big Bang theory. The Big Bang Theory is the origin hypothesis of the universe.
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I think the universe was created by a kind of huge explosion.
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And I\'ve heard of the Big Bang theory.
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The Big Bang Theory is the origin hypothesis of the universe.
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