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학생이 쓴 원문
I always think time is too fast.
I am trying to do my best everyday.
Such a think make me quick temper.
So I need the time for resting my sprit.
The resting doesn’t make people get tired of living.
So people need a holiday.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]ny!
Rest is vital for a better life. May you always find time to rest and calm your mind. Take a moment to breathe and release negativity.
Have a good day!
Aki~
I always think time is too fast.
>>> CORRECT!
I am trying to do my best everyday.
>>> I am trying to do my best every day.
Such a think make me quick temper.
>>> Such thought makes me quick-tempered.
So I need the time for resting my spirit.
>>> So I need time for my spirit to rest.
The resting doesn’t make people get tired of living.
>>> Resting doesn’t make people get tired of living.
So people need a holiday.
>>> CORRECT!
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