Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hey.
How have you been?
I heard that you had a network problem last tuesday.
T. Aki proceeded a class intead of you, and I could experience of new type of lesson.
I am sorry that I couln\'t make my Wendesday class.
At that time, I stayed in Jeon-Ju city which my sister-in-law lives and
I forgot to delay my class.
My family and my wife\'s families gathered in Nam-won city which brother-in-law\'s parents have a house in country side.
Kids enjoyed water play in a large water tube, and adults enjoyed grilled meats and talking.
All we had a blast.
Now I am so tired though.
Recently, there were many things that I had to be concerned about in the clinic.
Although there are a lot of work to finish, I am alright because I recharged my energy from a family gathering.
Writing task:
There are excessive clinics and doctors in Korea.
To inform our clinic to many people, we can use a media.
I think our signboard is the most attractive way to advertise in our area though.
See you tomorrow, if possible.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Dr. [이름]!
There might be a mistake when you wrote this but I let T. Faith read your message for her. Be careful next time so you can address your message to her directly :)
Well, I will just give a few corrections to your composition. Have a good day :)
T. Aki~
I heard that you had a network problem last tuesday.
>>> I heard that you had a network problem last Tuesday.
T. Aki proceeded a class intead of you, and I could experience of new type of lesson.
>>> T. Aki proceeded to do the class instead of you, and I could experience a new type of lesson.
I am sorry that I couln\'t make my Wendesday class.
>>> I am sorry that I couldn\'t make my Wednesday class.
At that time, I stayed in Jeon-Ju city which my sister-in-law lives and I forgot to delay my class.
>>> At that time, I stayed in Jeon-Ju City where my sister-in-law lives and I forgot to delay my class.
My family and my wife\'s families gathered in Nam-won city which brother-in-law\'s parents have a house in country side.
>>> My family and my wife\'s families gathered in Nam-won City where my brother-in-law\'s parents have a house in the countryside.
Kids enjoyed water play in a large water tube, and adults enjoyed grilled meats and talking.
>>> The kids enjoyed water play in a large water tube, and the adults enjoyed grilled meats and talking.
All we had a blast.
>>> We all had a blast!
Now I am so tired though.
>>> CORRECT!
Recently, there were many things that I had to be concerned about in the clinic.
>>> CORRECT!
Although there are a lot of work to finish, I am alright because I recharged my energy from a family gathering.
>>> Although there is a lot of work to finish, I am alright because I recharged my energy from a family gathering.
Writing task:
There are excessive clinics and doctors in Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
To inform our clinic to many people, we can use a media.
>>> To inform our clinic to many people, we can use media.
I think our signboard is the most attractive way to advertise in our area though.
>>> CORRECT!
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