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t is good to be introduced earlier, but I think proper English education should be provided.
If that happens, the number of children attending English kindergartens before elementary school will decrease.
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Good morning, [이름]!
If that happens, the number of children attending English kindergartens before elementary school will decrease.
I appreciate your thought here. Maybe we have different views because even we are both from Asia, but our idea about the English language is not the same. Unlike Korea, parents in the Philippines prefer introducing basic English at an early age. The foundation of our national language is not that strong here. it is just enough that we van speak our mother tongue and that\'s it.
Have a good day!
Aki~
It is good to be introduced earlier, but I think proper English education should be provided.
>>> CORRECT!
If that happens, the number of children attending English kindergartens before elementary school will decrease.
>>> CORRECT!
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