homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) a waiting boy
2) an interesting story
3) a breaking car
4) the forgotten pizza
5) the working father
6) I saw him gone.
7) the repaired computer
8) the talking students
9) exciting fans
10) the girl living next door
It rained and blowed strongly, and even snowed today.
It's Spring now, that's a strange weather.
Maybe that's the reason why this is Holy week.
When Christ dead, the weather was also strange.
Suddenly, the clouds covered the sky and hid the sun. It was a day but it was dark.
By the way, I have to go my fulte class today, after class I have to pick up my laundry.
I might carry my handbag, my flute case, 3 pieces of my winter coat and my umbrella.
I don't have a car, so I will walk with all of them to my home it will take 30 min.
강사 첨삭
Hello My dear Miss. [Name] thank you for dropping in your composition again..
Good job on your homework..
And about the weather in your country, that sounds really crazy! It evern snowed today? kkk..
You have to take care of yourself my dear you might catch a colds again..
Can\'t wait to talk to you agian later my dear..:*
Teacher Cam^^
1) a waiting boy
>>correct2) an interesting story
>>correct3) a breaking car
>>correct4) the forgotten pizza
>>correct5) the working father
>>correct6) I saw him gone.
>>correct7) the repaired computer >>correct
8) the talking students
>>correct9) exciting fans
>>correct10) the girl living next door >>correctIt rained and blowed strongly, and even snowed today.
>>correctIt\'s Spring now, that\'s a strange weather.
>>correctMaybe that\'s the reason why this is Holy week.
>>correctWhen Christ dead, the weather was also strange.
>>When Christ died, the weather ws also strange.Suddenly, the clouds covered the sky and hid the sun. It was a day but it was dark.
>>Suddenly the clouds covered the sky and it hid the sun. It was daytime but it was very dark by then.By the way, I have to go my fulte class today, after class I have to pick up my laundry.
>>correct (flute)I might carry my handbag, my flute case, 3 pieces of my winter coat and my umbrella.
>>correctI don\'t have a car, so I will walk with all of them to my home it will take 30 min.
>>correct
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