Homework
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Q: What is the main problem faced by your hometown?
A: The first one is severe traffic jam because most people want to live in and actually work in Seoul in semi-mandatory as a kind of work place, there child\'s education, and so on. The other one is that the cost to buy a house is getting high as same reasons.
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A: The first one is severe traffic jam because most people want to live in and actually work in Seoul in semi-mandatory as a kind of work place, there child\'s education, and so on.
>> The first one is severe traffic jam because most people want to live and actually work in Seoul. It is a semi-mandatory kind of work place with good child education system, and so on.
The other one is that the cost to buy a house is getting high as same reasons.
>> The other one is that the cost of houses is getting high for the same reason.
>> The other one is that the cost of houses is getting high for the same reason.
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