homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK for 08/03
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What do you think will happen to a country where there are older people more than young people? Do you think it\'s good or bad?
I think is too bad because they are not a balance all of country need balance.
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I think is too bad because they are not a balance all of country need balance.
>>I think it is too bad because there is no balanace.
>>All countries need balance.
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