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학생이 쓴 원문
I think I like acting alone.
I usually went shopping and took a walk alone.
I could have a thought and felt peaceful at that time.
These days over 50%people go to cafe alone.
And you can see a lot of people having meal at the restaurant.
Looking at the beach at the cafe and walking around the beach is my favorite pleasure I can do alone.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]ny!
There are only a few people who can survive by themselves, which means that some people are always dependent on someone and I totally commend those people. Have a good day!
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I think I like acting alone.
>>> CORRECT!
I usually went shopping and took a walk alone.
>>> CORRECT!
I could have a thought and felt peaceful at that time.
>>> I could have thought and felt peaceful at that time.
These days over 50%people go to cafe alone.
>>> These days over 50%people go to cafes alone.
And you can see a lot of people having meal at the restaurant.
>>> And you can see a lot of people having a meal at the restaurant.
Looking at the beach at the cafe and walking around the beach is my favorite pleasure I can do alone.
>>> CORRECT!
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