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2023-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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Q: If you were given the chance to study in another country, would you go for it? Why or why not? A: I think I will study in Europe. Because I think I\'ve heard that Europe is good at science, and I\'m interested in science. But, I don\'t want to live there, because there\'s more terrors than here.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for answering your homework and for doing your best.

~T. Divina^^

1. I think I will study in Europe.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Yes, and I think Europe is the best place to study.

2. Because I think I\'ve heard that Europe is good at science, and I\'m interested in science.
>> I\'ve heard that Europe is good in science, and I\'m interested in science.

3. But, I don\'t want to live there, because there\'s more terrors than here.
>> However, I don\'t want to live there because the place is more terrifying than here.


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