Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, T.Faith.
How are you doing today?
There was nothing special in the clinic.
That\'s way I am so bored.
Since I have a meeting with my friends this evening, I am just looking forward to it.
Because about one hour left to the close time, it\'s too difficult to wait for it.
Do you have any medical problem?
As I grow older, I quiet often have a symtom of gastritis, headache, dermatitis, and so on.
Also, I sometimes find my blood sugar level and blood pressure a little high.
Getting disease is so sad.
While I have a enthusiastic mind, my body is getting old so quickly.
Negative thought coms to my mind when there is no work, I think.
Writing task:
I want my people percieve me a good person.
I have a good empathy to others, which sometimes it makes me too hard.
I am not sure which type of person I want to be these days.
What about you?
My friend came to our clinic.
I should get going.
I will drink too much, so I am not sure if I can attend tomorrow\'s class.
See you.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Dr. [이름]! I hope you can easily overcome your hangover with some of your favorite foods today. I would also like people to see me as an understanding person, but since I know I am not perfect, I just pray that they can accept me just as I am.
Hello, T.Faith.>> Hello, T. Faith.
How are you doing today?
How are you doing today?
>> CORRECT
There was nothing special in the clinic. That\'s way I am so bored.
There was nothing special in the clinic. That\'s way I am so bored.
>> There was nothing special in the clinic that\'s why I was so bored.
Since I have a meeting with my friends this evening, I am just looking forward to it.
Since I have a meeting with my friends this evening, I am just looking forward to it.
>> CORRECT
Because about one hour left to the close time, it\'s too difficult to wait for it.
Because about one hour left to the close time, it\'s too difficult to wait for it.
>> There is only about one hour left before the closing time, and it\'s too difficult to wait for it.
Do you have any medical problem?
Do you have any medical problem?
>> CORRECT
As I grow older, I quiet often have a symtom of gastritis, headache, dermatitis, and so on.
As I grow older, I quiet often have a symtom of gastritis, headache, dermatitis, and so on.
>> As I grow older, I quiet often have a symptom of gastritis, headache, and dermatitis.
Also, I sometimes find my blood sugar level and blood pressure a little high.
Also, I sometimes find my blood sugar level and blood pressure a little high.
>> CORRECT
OR At times, my blood sugar level and blood pressure go up a little.
Getting disease is so sad.
Getting disease is so sad.
>> Getting diseases is so sad.
While I have a enthusiastic mind, my body is getting old so quickly.
While I have a enthusiastic mind, my body is getting old so quickly.
>> While I have an enthusiastic mind, my body is getting old so quickly.
Negative thought coms to my mind when there is no work, I think.
Negative thought coms to my mind when there is no work, I think.
>> Negative thoughts come to my mind when there is no work, I think.
Writing task:
Writing task:
>> CORRECT
I want my people percieve me a good person.
I want my people percieve me a good person.
>> I want my people to perceive me as a good person.
I have a good empathy to others, which sometimes it makes me too hard.
I have a good empathy to others, which sometimes it makes me too hard.
>> I have a good empathy to others, which sometimes makes me feel difficult.
I am not sure which type of person I want to be these days.
I am not sure which type of person I want to be these days.
>> CORRECT
What about you?
What about you?
>> CORRECT
My friend came to our clinic.
My friend came to our clinic.
>> CORRECT
I should get going.
I should get going.
>> CORRECT
I will drink too much, so I am not sure if I can attend tomorrow\'s class.
I will drink too much, so I am not sure if I can attend tomorrow\'s class.
>> CORRECT
See you.
See you.
>> CORRECT
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