Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Many parents have their children sent to the day care center or school by free.
So parents are free on weekdays .
But They should hang out with their children on weekend.
Taking care about children and preparing the meal is difficult to them.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, Ms. [이름]ny!
I really admire those parents who are capable of multitasking. I have seen these characteristics among Asian moms, not all but the majority of Asian moms are very caring to their children compared to moms from the West.
That\'s why I salute you for all the things you do for your family, especially on weekends that they are around.
Enjoy your day!
Aki~
Many parents have their children sent to the day care center or school by free.
>>> Many parents have their children sent to the daycare center or school for free.
So parents are free on weekdays .
>>> CORRECT!
But They should hang out with their children on weekend.
>>> But they should hang out with their children on weekends.
Taking care about children and preparing the meal is difficult to them.
>>> Taking care of children and preparing the meal is difficult to them.
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