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2023-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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HOMEWORK for 08/08 Write 5-8 sentences TOPIC: What do you think are the advantages in learning other languages? Do you think there might be some disadvantages, too? If there are, what are they? I think if someone who can other languages has posible a lot of chance for many experience and they can conversation to many another people. I think if I can a lot of lanueges don\'t have disadvantages.

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Hello there, [이름] [이름]! You did great again in this homework. Thank you so much for always doing a great work in your homework, and also in class. See you again soon! ~ T. Marie
I think if someone who can other languages
has posible a lot of chance for many experience and they can conversation to many another people.
>> I think if someone can speak other languages, they have a lot of possibility or chance to have much experience.
>> They can have more conversation with many other people, too. 
I think if I can a lot of lanueges don\'t have disadvantages.
>> I think speaking a lot of languages does not have any disadvantage. 

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