homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK for 08/09
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: Aside from English, what other languages would you like to learn in your free time?
I want chinese and japanese very well because if I can speak chinese well I can conversation with a lot of people and japanese is just I like japan
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름] [이름]! You did great in answering this question clearly. Let\'s make sure to keep on doing activities that will help you make more sensible sentences next time. See you in class! ~ T. Marie ^^
I want chinese and japanese very well because if I can speak chinese well I can conversation with a lot of people and japanese is just I like japan.>> I want to learn Chinese and Japanese very well.
>> If I can speak Chinese, I can have conversation with a lot of people.
>> I want to speak Japanese just because I like Japan.
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