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Hoarding is the act of purchasing food or certain items in advance in anticipation that they will be difficult to buy due to a shortage or that their value will increase. Collecting is the collection of objects for reasons such as hobbies.
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Hoarding is the act of purchasing food or certain items in advance in anticipation that they will be difficult to buy due to a shortage or that their value will increase.
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Collecting is the collection of objects for reasons such as hobbies.
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Hoarding is the act of purchasing food or certain items in advance in anticipation that they will be difficult to buy due to a shortage or that their value will increase WHILE Collecting is the collection of objects for reasons such as hobbies.
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