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2023-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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Q: What was the best decision that you have made so far as a student? A: I think the best decision that I\'ve made was not giving up math. Actually when I was a kid, I thought math is not necessary for me, so I tried to give it up, but I couldn\'t. And that decision made me to realize math is an important subject.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for answering your homework. Not giving up math is really a good thing because you will be able to use such skill when you become older.

~T. Divina^^

1. I think the best decision that I\'ve made was not giving up math.
>>CORRECT!
OR >> I think the best decision that I have ever made was to not give up math.

2Actually when I was a kid, I thought math is not necessary for me, so I tried to give it up, but I couldn\'t.
>>When I was a kid, I thought math was not necessary for me so I tried to give it up, but I couldn\'t.

3. And that decision made me to realize math is an important subject.
>>That decision made me realize that math is an important subject.

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