Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, T. Beth.
How was your day?
As you know, a typhoon \"Khanun\" came to our country.
Fortunately, there will be only a little damage in our city, because the typhoon is passing through the other route.
As I told you, there are many staff who are waiting for the salary increase and promotion in our clinic.
Dr. [Name] and I met a staff, and we proposed a higher salary.
Of course, she looked so happy and satisfied with it.
Meanwhile, I was so surprised after checking my E-mail.
A card company sent me that I paid quite a big money to the hotel in Singapore, but it showed me the other date from the date when I really stayed.
I was confused if this payment was resulted from the hacking.
In conclusion, I found out that there can be a little difference the date between usage and approval.
Wring task:
As you mentioned it, we depend on it too much, I think.
I hope that I could live in countryside someday, because I am sick of city, technology, and money sometimes.
What about you?
See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Dr. [이름]. Regarding the hacking on you bank account, you have to double check and be sure it wasn\'t really hacked. That would be disastrous if it was.
I live in the countryside now. There are no tall buildings in my city. This city is on top of a mountain so we have a lot of trees and nature. I love living here because of the less hectic and quiet life. I think I am dependent on technology. I need it for my work and for other things. We often experience a blackout in our city and that causes me great inconvenience.
See you next class!
See you next class!
Hello, T. Beth.
>>> correct
How was your day?
How was your day?
>>> correct
As you know, a typhoon \"Khanun\" came to our country.
As you know, a typhoon \"Khanun\" came to our country.
>>> As you know, typhoon \"Khanun\" came to our country.
Fortunately, there will be only a little damage in our city, because the typhoon is passing through the other route.
>>> Fortunately, there will be only a little damage in our city, because the typhoon is passing through another route.
As I told you, there are many staff who are waiting for the salary increase and promotion in our clinic.
>>> correct
Dr. [Name] and I met a staff, and we proposed a higher salary.
Dr. [Name] and I met a staff, and we proposed a higher salary.
>>> correct
Of course, she looked so happy and satisfied with it.
Of course, she looked so happy and satisfied with it.
>>> correct
Meanwhile, I was so surprised after checking my E-mail.
Meanwhile, I was so surprised after checking my E-mail.
>>> correct
A card company sent me that I paid quite a big money to the hotel in Singapore, but it showed me the other date from the date when I really stayed.
A card company sent me that I paid quite a big money to the hotel in Singapore, but it showed me the other date from the date when I really stayed.
>>> A card company sent me a notification that I paid quite a big amount of money to the hotel in Singapore, but it showed me a different date from the date when I really stayed there.
I was confused if this payment was resulted from the hacking.
>>> I was confused if this payment was a result from hacking.
In conclusion, I found out that there can be a little difference the date between usage and approval.
>>> In conclusion, I found out that there can be a little difference with the date between usage and approval.
Wring task:
As you mentioned it, we depend on it too much, I think.
As you mentioned it, we depend on it too much, I think.
>>> OR: Like you said, we depend on it too much, I think.
I hope that I could live in countryside someday, because I am sick of city, technology, and money sometimes.
>>> I hope that I could live in the countryside someday, because I am sick and tired of the city, technology, and money sometimes.
What about you?
>>> correct
See you tomorrow.
See you tomorrow.
>>> correct
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