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Q. What is the popular hobbies in Korea?
For people in 40s to 50s, hiking is the most accessible and popular. But in case of the rest of them,it\'s hard to clarify what the most popular hobby is, because there are a varity of hobbies.
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Q. What is the popular hobbies in Korea?
For people in 40s to 50s, hiking is the most accessible and popular.
For people in 40s to 50s, hiking is the most accessible and popular.
>> For people in their 40s to 50s, hiking is the most accessible and popular.
But in case of the rest of them, it\'s hard to clarify what the most popular hobby is, because there are a varity of hobbies.
>> But in the case of others, it\'s hard to clarify which is the most popular hobby because there\'s a variety of them.
>> But in the case of others, it\'s hard to clarify which is the most popular hobby because there\'s a variety of them.
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