homework
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HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about \" My best summer vacation\"
My best summer vacation was hanging out with my relatives.
My family and relatives went on a trip to the beach.
I had a great time there.
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Hi, Jessica1 Thank you so much for answering your homework :)
I really appreciate it!
Keep it up ^^
-T. Nikki ^^
My best summer vacation was hanging out with my relatives.
>>The best summer vacation I had was when I hang out with my relatives.
My family and relatives went on a trip to the beach
>> CORRECT!
I had a great time there.
>> I really had a great time with them.
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