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2023-08-15 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I want to live next life, that is eagle. Because it\'s wonderful and strong. Finally it\'s can fly.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

Did you know that the eagle is the national bird of my country, the Philippines? ^-^
That\'s a trivia for you. Thank you for answering your homework.

You did a good job. I just made some modifications.
See you tomorrow! Have a good night!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


I want to live next life, that is eagle. 
>>> Firstly, I want to be reborn as an eagle in my next life.
Because it\'s wonderful and strong. 
>>> It\'s because it looks wonderful and strong.
Finally it\'s can fly.
>>> Lastly, it can fly.
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