Homework
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Q: What exciting and fun activities can be done during winter?
A: A lot of people like to enjoy skiing and ice skating or snow boarding.
I also like to enjoy them, and it\'s because they have their own advantages and interests.
I think they are fun because they all use ice or snow.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
1. A lot of people like to enjoy skiing and ice skating or snow boarding.
>> A lot of people enjoy skiing, ice skating, or snowboarding.
2. I also like to enjoy them, and it\'s because they have their own advantages and interests.
>> I also enjoy them because they have their own advantages and interesting aspects.
3. I think they are fun because they all use ice or snow.
>>CORRECT!
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