Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, T. Beth.
It\'s already past eight pm.
Recently, I feel the cool air outside, it means the autumn is coming soon.
Did I tell you about my car?
I have a convertible car, red colored, branded BMW.
My favorite color is red, and I really enjoy driving my car without the roof.
I couldn\'t open the roof of my car in the past 2 months because it was too hot outside.
However, I did that today on my way home.
It was still warm outside, but I couldn\'t stand the desire of it.
There is a news in the clinic.
A new staff who applied for a counselling manager came to our clinic this morning.
She looked so pretty and kind.
I heard that she was a flight attendant in the past, and she showed us very polite greeting.
It was impressive.
I hope that she will get used to our clinic soon.
Writing task:
Maybe you know that most koreans love high speed at any time.
That\'s why our internet speed is highest in the world.
I think that a novel technology usually get us away from hesistancy.
See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Dr. [이름]. That\'s a nice car you have there. It would definitely be nice to drive it when the weather is nice outside.
I hope the new counseling manager will be a good additional to your team. See you in class!
I hope the new counseling manager will be a good additional to your team. See you in class!
Hello, T. Beth.
>>> correct
It\'s already past eight pm.
It\'s already past eight pm.
>>> correct
Recently, I feel the cool air outside, it means the autumn is coming soon.
Recently, I feel the cool air outside, it means the autumn is coming soon.
>>> correct
Did I tell you about my car?
>>> correct
I have a convertible car, red colored, branded BMW.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I have a convertible BMW car, red colored.
My favorite color is red, and I really enjoy driving my car without the roof.
>>> correct
I couldn\'t open the roof of my car in the past 2 months because it was too hot outside.
I couldn\'t open the roof of my car in the past 2 months because it was too hot outside.
>>> correct
However, I did that today on my way home.
>>> correct
It was still warm outside, but I couldn\'t stand the desire of it.
>>> OR: It was still warm outside, but I couldn\'t stand the desire to do it.
There is a news in the clinic.
>>> correct
A new staff who applied for a counselling manager came to our clinic this morning.
>>> A new staff who applied for the position of a counselling manager came to our clinic this morning.
>>> OR: A new staff who applied as a counselling manager came to our clinic this morning.
She looked so pretty and kind.
>>> correct
I heard that she was a flight attendant in the past, and she showed us very polite greeting.
>>> I heard that she was a flight attendant in the past, and she showed us a very polite greeting.
>>> OR: I heard that she was a flight attendant in the past, and she greeted us very politely.
It was impressive.
>>> correct
I hope that she will get used to our clinic soon.
>>> correct
Writing task:
Maybe you know that most Koreans love high speed at any time.
Writing task:
Maybe you know that most Koreans love high speed at any time.
>>> correct
>>> OR: As you may already know, most Koreans love a fast speed at any time.
That\'s why our internet speed is highest in the world.
That\'s why our internet speed is highest in the world.
>>> OR: That\'s why our internet speed is best in the world.
I think that a novel technology usually get us away from hesistancy.
>>> I think that a novel technology usually gets us away from hesitancy.
See you tomorrow.
>>> correct
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