homework
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HOMEWORK for 08/10
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: What can Art do to people\'s life? Do you think Art is important?
I think Art is enjoyed from rich people because usually Art is inefficieny so people who have to live hard can enjoy just a little
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I think Art is enjoyed from rich people because usually Art is inefficieny so people who have to live hard can enjoy just a little.>> I think Art is mostly enjoyed by rich people.
>> It\'s because Art in inefficient, so many people who have to live hard can only enjoy it a little.
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