Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: Which activities do you find more fun, summer activities or winter activities? Why?
A: For me, winter activities are more exciting than summer activities.
Actually, it would depend on the person, but I don\'t like the hot weather of Korea, and the thrill that I can feel by skiing is the best.
But I think summer activities like going to water park is also good.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections to take note of:
1. For me, winter activities are more exciting than summer activities.
>>CORRECT!
2. Actually, it would depend on the person, but I don\'t like the hot weather of Korea, and the thrill that I can feel by skiing is the best.
>>It actually depends on the person, but I don\'t like the hot weather in Korea, and the thrill that I can feel by skiing is the best.
3. But I think summer activities like going to water park is also good.
>>However, summer activities like going to water park is also good.
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