homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q)Why is it important to learn English?
A) Because my job needs to talk to people. There are many countries use English. I think I will learn a lot of new thing. so it is important to learn English.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Amy. Thank you so much for doing your homework. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep up the good work and see you on Monday! ^^
-T. Julia
Because my job needs to talk to people.
>> It is important to learn English because my job requires me to talk to people.
There are many countries use English.
>> There are many countries that use English.
I think I will learn a lot of new thing. so it is important to learn English.
>> I think I will learn a lot of new things, so it is important to learn English.
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