homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, T. Beth.
How was your weekend?
Since there was no special events, I took a rest at home after working.
These days, I\'ve been depressed somewhat.
Maybe, that\'s because around 1 month have passed after my last trip to Singapore.
I think I can recharge with travel again.
I also have a concern about our clinic\'s revenue.
The profit of our clinic tends to go down slowly recently.
Actually, I don\'t care the profit day by day.
My colleague, Dr. [Name], is quite different from me though.
He is now very sensitive because of concern about money.
It made me nervous.
In addition, I heard about the conflicts among many staff.
It is too difficult for me to watch my staff leave our clinic after a fight.
Regarding the homework, I tend to regret many things in the past.
Fortunately, I forget the bad mood so quickly.
My brain might have modified some bad memories into good ones, and it happened involuntarily.
After regreting something, we can learn something from it.
How about you?
See you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Dr. [이름].
My weekend was pretty normal as well. I didn\'t do anything special. I just stayed home, did a lot of chores and spent time with my dog. My mother owns a gown shop where she rents out gowns for weddings. I spent my weekend washing used gowns. There were two bags of it to wash so it took me the whole Saturday doing it. I dried them all out on Sunday and put all of them in the bag. They are now ready to be sent back to the shop.
I do have a lot of regrets in life as well.
Hello, T. Beth.
My weekend was pretty normal as well. I didn\'t do anything special. I just stayed home, did a lot of chores and spent time with my dog. My mother owns a gown shop where she rents out gowns for weddings. I spent my weekend washing used gowns. There were two bags of it to wash so it took me the whole Saturday doing it. I dried them all out on Sunday and put all of them in the bag. They are now ready to be sent back to the shop.
I do have a lot of regrets in life as well.
Hello, T. Beth.
>>> correct
How was your weekend?
How was your weekend?
>>> correct
Since there was no special events, I took a rest at home after working.
>>> correct
These days, I\'ve been depressed somewhat.
>>> correct
>>> OR: These days, I\'ve been somewhat depressed.
Maybe, that\'s because around 1 month have passed after my last trip to Singapore.
>>> correct
>>> OR: It\'s probably because a month has passed since I visited Singapore.
I think I can recharge with travel again.
>>> correct
I also have a concern about our clinic\'s revenue.
>>> correct
The profit of our clinic tends to go down slowly recently.
>>> correct
Actually, I don\'t care the profit day by day.
>>> Actually, I don\'t care about the profit on daily basis.
My colleague, Dr. [Name], is quite different from me though.
>>> correct
He is now very sensitive because of concern about money.
>>> correct
It made me nervous.
>>> correct
In addition, I heard about the conflicts among many staffs.
>>> correct
It is too difficult for me to watch my staff leave our clinic after a fight.
>>> correct
Regarding the homework, I tend to regret many things in the past.
>>> correct
Fortunately, I forget the bad mood so quickly.
>>> correct
My brain might have modified some bad memories into good ones, and it happened involuntarily.
>>> correct
After regretting something, we can learn something from it.
>>> correct
>>> OR: Even though we regret something, there\'s something we can learn from it.
How about you?
>>> correct
See you tomorrow.
See you tomorrow.
>>> correct
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