homework
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HOMEWORK for 08/16
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: Have you ever thought of being an artist? What kind of artist would you like to be? What do you want to achieve as an artist?
If I have to be a artist I thoungt that I will be media artist because I think the category of IT can get more money. I want that if I will be anything but I can gain economic freedom
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If I have to be a artist I thoungt that I will be media artist because I think the category of IT can get more money. I want that if I will be anything but I can gain economic freedom.>> If I have to be an artist, I thought that media artist will be a good idea because I can earn more money from the IT industry.
>> I would want that if I can be anything, but I wang to gain economic freedom.
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