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The first time I was separated from my parents was when I was in my 20s and went to Seoul to study animation.
At that time, there were no academies to learn animation in Gwangju.
I lived at my aunt\'s house in Seoul, worked part-time to earn pocket money, and studied at an academy.
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The first time I was separated from my parents was when I was in my 20s and went to Seoul to study animation.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> When I went to Seoul to study animation s my first time being away form my parents.
At that time, there were no academies to learn animation in Gwangju.
>>> CORRECT!
I lived at my aunt\'s house in Seoul, worked part-time to earn pocket money, and studied at an academy.
>>> CORRECT!
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