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2023-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Hello, T. Beth. First of all, I\'d like to give you a gratitude about your sincere teaching. As I said a few days ago, I lost my class with T. Donna by my mistake. You and T. Donna are very popular in Power English, so it\'s difficult to sign up the class. Since I had joined the class with T. Donna for about one year, I really missed her so much. Thus, I waited the chance to rejoin her class. Then, I found the vacant time of T. Donna\'s class tomorrow morning, and I decided to change into her class. The reason why I explain about this in detail is because I don\'t want you to think that I wasn\'t satisfied with your class. I totally was satisfied with your class, and it\'s true. You are energetic and enthusiastic. Also, you have a power to make other people feel better. Maybe, my wife or I will meet you in the class someday, I guess. That\'s because we will miss you. Take care all the time. And, I hope that you always keep your nice smile. Thanks again for your great teaching.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this Dr. [이름].
I completely understand and it\'s definitely fine by me. No worries at all. 
Actually, I just noticed the change of class now, and seeing that you are under T. Donna, it makes me feel great. She is a great teacher. I know her and I have met her many times in the office. She is also very energetic and great in her job. If I were a student, I would take her class too. :D
Anyways, good luck and see you around then. Have a great day!


Hello, T. Beth.
>>>> correct  
First of all, I\'d like to give you a gratitude about your sincere teaching.
>>>>  First of all, I\'d like to extend my gratitude for your sincere teaching. 
As I said a few days ago, I lost my class with T. Donna by my mistake.
>>>> correct  
You and T. Donna are very popular in Power English, so it\'s difficult to sign up the class.
>>>>  correct    
>>>> OR: You and T. Donna are very popular in Power English, so it\'s difficult to sign up for your class.
Since I had joined the class with T. Donna for about one year, I really missed her so much.
>>>>   correct   
Thus, I waited the chance to rejoin her class.
>>>>  correct    
Then, I found the vacant time of T. Donna\'s class tomorrow morning, and I decided to change into her class.
>>>>  correct    
The reason why I explain about this in detail is because I don\'t want you to think that I wasn\'t satisfied with your class.
>>>>   correct   
I totally was satisfied with your class, and it\'s true.
>>>>   correct   
You are energetic and enthusiastic.
>>>>   correct   
Also, you have a power to make other people feel better.
>>>> correct     
Maybe, my wife or I will meet you in the class someday, I guess.
>>>>   correct   
That\'s because we will miss you.
>>>>   correct   
Take care all the time.
>>>>  correct    
And, I hope that you always keep your nice smile.
>>>>   correct   
Thanks again for your great teaching.
>>>>   correct   

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