Homework
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Q: What do you usually bring when you go on a trip with your family or friends?
A: I usually bring my food, my phone and my cloths when I go on a trip with my family.
Those things are what I seriously need when I go on a trip, and I sometimes also bring some snacks.
And usually I just buy things in the country that I travel.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
3. And usually I just buy things in the country that I travel.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I usually bring my food, my phone and my cloths when I go on a trip with my family.
>>I usually bring my food, my phone and my clothes when I go on a trip with my family.
2. Those things are what I seriously need when I go on a trip, and I sometimes also bring some snacks.
>>Those things are what I seriously need when I go on a trip. Sometimes, I also bring some snacks.
3. And usually I just buy things in the country that I travel.
>>Usually, I just buy the other things in the country that I travel to.
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