homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK for 08/21
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: Do you think people in your country appreciates Art very much? Why do you think so?
Yes I think the people in our country think high opinion to art
because a lot of artists are very famous and very rich
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름] [이름]! As always, you were diligent in answering this homework. Let\'s just continue to work harder in order to improve your skills and knowledge in English even further. Keep it up! ~ T. Marie ^^
Yes I think the people in our country think high opinion to art>> Yes, I think people in our country have high opinion about art.
because a lot of artists are very famous and very rich
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