Homework
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Q: What secrets did your friends have that you accidentally revealed to another person?
A: Actually, I\'ve never revealed my friends\' secret, but I think the worst thing that I can reveal is private information.
Private information is important to everybody, so revealing private information is not just the problem of friend or not, it\'s the problem of arrested or not.
I think just revealing secret is not a good thing.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. Private information is important to everybody, so revealing private information is not just the problem of friend or not, it\'s the problem of arrested or not.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. Actually, I\'ve never revealed my friends\' secret, but I think the worst thing that I can reveal is private information.
>>Actually, I\'ve never revealed any of my friends\' secrets, but I think the worst thing that I can reveal is private information.
2. Private information is important to everybody, so revealing private information is not just the problem of friend or not, it\'s the problem of arrested or not.
>>Private information is important to everybody, so revealing private information is not just a little problem because it could get you arrested.
3. I think just revealing secret is not a good thing.
>>I think revealing a secret is not a good thing.
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