Homework
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I want to more money. Because beauty life is hard but money life is easy and good. And money is can have very many money!!
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!^^
We can satisfy our basic demands thanks to money.
Humans require money to pay for all the necessities of life, including food, shelter, medical expenses, and a quality education.
However, there are things that money can\'t buy such as happiness, friendship, trust, and many more.
Thank you for answering your homework. I will see you in our next class!^^
__T. Mayleen :)
I want to more money.
>>> I want to have more money.
Because beauty life is hard but money life is easy and good.
>>> It\'s because beauty makes life hard, but money makes life easy and good.
And money is can have very many money!!
>>> I can have anything I want if I have a lot of money.
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