homework &
학생이 쓴 원문
1) many pupils
2) much time, many time
3) much money
4) many dollars
5) much milk
6) many children
7) much water
8) much fun
9) many dogs
10) many people
I went to my flute class yesterday. I was a little bit late. Actually I'm always late.
The cultural center is too far away from my work.
The class is conducted man to man and in coming order.
When I arrived, students have been practicing.
I was in last turn, I had enough time to practice before my teacher's lesson.
I couldn't practice my flute in my home cause of noise that I make.
When I bought my flute first, I practiced covering with a blanket. It was very inconvenience.
I also went to the park near my house to practice. There were many people, I was very shy.
I haven't the place to practice freely.
I have no choice but to do my best in the cultural center.
After my flute class, I feel hungry. Sometimes I have dinner at night.
Flute is my pleasure as well as my pain.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name], thank you for always making your homework..:)
I commend you for a job well done!
I always envy you for you have time to learn how to play the flute, how I wish I could do that too,kkk..
Anyway, I will be talking to you more about your flute class later my dear okay?
Can\'t wait for our class Miss. [Name]..
Teacher Cam^^
1) many pupils
>>correct2) much time, many time
>>correct3) much money
>>correct4) many dollars
>>correct5) much milk
>>correct6) many children
>>correct7) much water
>>correct8) much fun
>>correct9) many dogs
>>correct10) many people>>correctI went to my flute class yesterday. I was a little bit late. Actually I\'m always late.
>>correctThe cultural center is too far away from my work.
>>correctThe class is conducted man to man and in coming order. >>The class is a man to man class and in coming order.
When I arrived, students have been practicing.
>>When I arrive, students are already practicing.I was in last turn, I had enough time to practice before my teacher\'s lesson.
>>correctI couldn\'t practice my flute in my home cause of noise that I make.>>correct
When I bought my flute first, I practiced covering with a blanket. It was very inconvenience.
>>When I first bought my flute, I practiced it with a blanket covering me and it was very inconvenient.I also went to the park near my house to practice. There were many people, I was very shy.
>>correctI haven\'t the place to practice freely.
>>I don\'t have any place to practice freely.I have no choice but to do my best in the cultural center.
>>correctAfter my flute class, I feel hungry. Sometimes I have dinner at night.
>>correctFlute is my pleasure as well as my pain.
>>correct
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