homework
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HOMEWORK for 08/22
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: How can more people appreciate different forms of Art? Do you think it\'s difficult to convince people to love and appreciate Art?
maybe have to get the people experience to art and they will know the part of art
I think anyone know what to do
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Hello there, [이름] [이름]! Thank you for answering this homework today. You are doing great in improving the skills that you have so far, so let\'s just continue to do more activities that will help you have more confidence in using English well. See you in class! ~ T. Marie ^^
maybe have to get the people experience to art and they will know the part of art>> Maybe people have to experience art so that they will know parts of it.
I think anyone know what to do
I think anyone know what to do
>> I think then, anyone will know about it.
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