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학생이 쓴 원문
My most difficult decision is to change my life philosophy to live my own way. I had the personality of not doing the things I didn\'t want to do and doing the things I wanted to do, but after getting married and living as someone\'s wife, mother, and daughter-in-law instead of someone\'s child, I had many troubles. Imagining myself as an older person and not alone, I came to accept these situations and decided to do the things I didn’t want to do and put up with the things I wanted to do. After making that decision, I feel comfortable and don\'t feel stressed.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, Eliana!
Maturity comes when we try to neglect ourselves and become a better person. :)
Have a good day!
Aki~
My most difficult decision is to change my life philosophy to live my own way.
>>> CORRECT!
I had the personality of not doing the things I didn\'t want to do and doing the things I wanted to do, but after getting married and living as someone\'s wife, mother, and daughter-in-law instead of someone\'s child, I had many troubles.
>>> CORRECT!
Imagining myself as an older person and not alone, I came to accept these situations and decided to do the things I didn’t want to do and put up with the things I wanted to do.
>>> CORRECT!
After making that decision, I feel comfortable and don\'t feel stressed.
>>> CORRECT!
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