Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree.
School life is said to be a small society.
I think it\'s natural to ask the student who has been harmed if the damage is due to the individual action.
It is impossible to punish from the beginning, so it is necessary to understand and persuade.
However, I think there should be a deserved punishment if you continue to do harm despite going through such a process.
This is because the other students who are with him will be directly or indirectly stressed mentally or physically.
I think we need to relearn the sense of community together.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Eliana!
You constructed your sentences correctly. Thank you for doing your homework.
Remember: It takes a village to raise a child.
Have a good day!
Aki~
I agree. School life is said to be a small society.
>>> CORRECT!
I think it\'s natural to ask the student who has been harmed if the damage is due to the individual action.
>>> CORRECT!
It is impossible to punish from the beginning, so it is necessary to understand and persuade.
>>> CORRECT!
However, I think there should be a deserved punishment if you continue to do harm despite going through such a process.
>>> CORRECT!
This is because the other students who are with him will be directly or indirectly stressed mentally or physically.
>>> CORRECT!
I think we need to relearn the sense of community together.
>>> CORRECT!
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