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Q: How necessary is it to accomplish tasks on time? Why?
A: I think accomplishing tasks on time is very important.
Actually, the deadline is promise between student and teacher, and that can make their relationship better or worse.
And if a person does not finish tasks on time, other can feel uncomfortable by that.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. Actually, the deadline is promise between student and teacher, and that can make their relationship better or worse.
3. And if a person does not finish tasks on time, other can feel uncomfortable by that.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think accomplishing tasks on time is very important.
>>CORRECT!
2. Actually, the deadline is promise between student and teacher, and that can make their relationship better or worse.
>>Actually, a deadline is a promise between a student and a teacher, and it can either make their relationship better or worse.
3. And if a person does not finish tasks on time, other can feel uncomfortable by that.
>>If a person does not finish his/her tasks on time, the other person can feel uncomfortable by it.
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