homework
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What activities do you enjoy doing in each season?
-> In spring, I go to Han River for watching cherry blossoms and ready to midterm exam.
In summer, I go to other area for summer vacation and swim in the water.
In fall, I mostly ready to my final exam.
In winter, I have a Christmas party with my friends!
How would you describe a perfect weather?
-> Perfect weather is moderate temperature. because moderate temperature makes people feelings better.
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Thank you for this Jenny!
What activities do you enjoy doing in each season?
-> In spring, I go to Han River for watching cherry blossoms and ready to midterm exam.
-> In spring, I go to Han River for watching cherry blossoms and ready to midterm exam.
>>> In spring, I go to Han River for watching cherry blossoms and get ready for midterm exam.
>>> OR: In spring, I go to Han River to see the cherry blossoms and get ready for midterm exam.
In summer, I go to other area for summer vacation and swim in the water.
In summer, I go to other area for summer vacation and swim in the water.
>>> correct
In fall, I mostly ready to my final exam.
In fall, I mostly ready to my final exam.
>>> In fall, I mostly get ready for my final exam.
In winter, I have a Christmas party with my friends!
>>> correct
How would you describe a perfect weather?
-> Perfect weather is moderate temperature. because moderate temperature makes people feelings better.
>>> correct
How would you describe a perfect weather?
-> Perfect weather is moderate temperature. because moderate temperature makes people feelings better.
>>> A perfect weather is one with a moderate temperature because a moderate temperature makes people feel better.
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