homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK for 08/25
Write 5-8 sentences
TOPIC: Do you think it\'s important for people to set goals in their lives? Why do you think so?
sure its very important because if people don\'t set goals in their lives They never move in general so we have to set goal for our motivation
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름] [이름]! Surely, you always do your best to answer the homework that I\'m giving you. Let\'s continue to study more in the class. See you there! ~ T. Marie ^^
sure its very important because if people don\'t set goals in their lives They never move in general so we have to set goal for our motivation>> Sure, they are important because if people don\'t set goals in their lives, they never move in general.
>> So, we have to set goals for our motivation.
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