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Q: What trips are considered dangerous? Why do you say so?
A: I think usually dangerous trips are going to a dangerous countries.
Usually in dangerous countries, there are a lot of crimes, so I can hurt while I\'m on trip.
Also, trip with a dangerous plans is dangerous too.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. Usually in dangerous countries, there are a lot of crimes, so I can hurt while I\'m on trip.
3. Also, trip with a dangerous plans is dangerous too.
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~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think usually dangerous trips are going to a dangerous countries.
>>I think dangerous trips are usually going to dangerous countries.
2. Usually in dangerous countries, there are a lot of crimes, so I can hurt while I\'m on trip.
>>In these dangerous countries, there are a lot of crimes so I can get hurt while I\'m on the trip.
3. Also, trip with a dangerous plans is dangerous too.
>>Also, trips with dangerous plans are dangerous, too.
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