Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: Why do some people love to travel?
A: I think some people love to travel because they\'re addicted to have a wonderful experiences.
Actually, I think a lot of people like to have a wonderful experience, but they don\'t have enough time or enough motivation.
And the travel lovers are who have both enough time and motivation.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. Actually, I think a lot of people like to have a wonderful experience, but they don\'t have enough time or enough motivation.
3. And the travel lovers are who have both enough time and motivation.
Thank you for answering your homework!
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Here are some things to take note of:
1. I think some people love to travel because they\'re addicted to have a wonderful experiences.
>>I think some people love to travel because they\'re addicted to having wonderful experiences.
2. Actually, I think a lot of people like to have a wonderful experience, but they don\'t have enough time or enough motivation.
>>I think a lot of people like to have a wonderful experience, but they don\'t have enough time or enough motivation.
3. And the travel lovers are who have both enough time and motivation.
>>Those who love to travel are those who both have enough time and motivation.
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