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There are many Greektemples and old structure in Rome.
It’s an unbelievable how did the Romes move the huge marble and build temple without
machine.
In addition They are gorgeous not countrified.
I surprised at unlimited ability of people.
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Good day, Ms. [이름]ny!
The Romans were master builders and during the time of the Republic, they constructed many temples, monuments, and stadiums.
Due to harsh labor, the leaders were able to build magnificent structures to amplify their power and influence. This was done to show other nations that they can not be easily conquered. Years have passed, and these structures may have been ruined but the legacy will never be forgotten.
Have a great day!
Aki~
There are many Greektemples and old structure in Rome.
>>>There are many Greek temples and old structures in Rome.
It’s an unbelievable how did the Romes move the huge marble and build temple without machine.
>>>It’s unbelievable how the Romans moved the huge marble and built the temple without a machine.
>>> It\'s fascinating how the Romans moved the huge marble and built the temple without a machine.
In addition They are gorgeous not countrified.
>>> In addition, they are genuine, not counterfeit.
I surprised at unlimited ability of people.
>>> I am surprised at the unlimited ability of people.
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