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2023-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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Q: What is your earliest memory of going to another place with you family? A: I think my earliest memory of going another place is going to the Philippines. Actually, I\'ve been to a island in our country. but I actually don\'t remember, so my first memory is in the Philippines. I have a lot of memories there because I lived there for two years.

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Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some things to take note of:

1. I think my earliest memory of going another place is going to the Philippines.
>>I think my earliest memory of going to another place is going to the Philippines.

2. Actually, I\'ve been to a island in our country. but I actually don\'t remember, so my first memory is in the Philippines.
>>Actually, I\'ve been to an island in our country but I don\'t remember it that much, so my first memory is in the Philippines.

3. I have a lot of memories there because I lived there for two years.
>>CORRECT!

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